• neidu2@feddit.nl
    432·
    6 months ago

    Welcome to the garden 🎶
    Please respect the rules 🎶
    There are no dogs or ball games here 🎶
    And especially no barbecues 🎶

    • some_guy@lemmy.sdf.org
      4·
      6 months ago

      I can’t place my finger on it, but it’s lacking something… it doesn’t quite rock the same way. Can someone please explain what’s missing? I feel like it should be a hit, but maybe I’m getting old.

        • nifty@lemmy.world
          1·
          6 months ago

          Welcome to the garden Please respect the rules We got no dogs or ball games And no barbecues

        • MelodiousFunk@slrpnk.net
          1·
          6 months ago

          But they did hit all of the points on the smaller sign. Might have been better to try and work them into the next lines but I give credit for the effort.

          • Wilzax@lemmy.world
            2·
            6 months ago

            Yes I noticed that. I think it would fit into the original tune quite well since the meter for that section changes between verses. Syllable count is about right. But it doesn’t rock as hard because the meter doesn’t flow as well.

    • jubilationtcornpone@sh.itjust.worksEnglish
      3·
      6 months ago

      🎶We are the people who can find
      Whatever tools you need
      Hoes and rakes and shovels
      For pulling all the weeds

      In the garden, welcome to the garden
      Preventing plant disease
      Ooh-Ah! I need to get some more seed!🎶