Catoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 1 day agoWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneimagemessage-square21fedilinkarrow-up1298arrow-down111
arrow-up1287arrow-down1imageWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneCatoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 1 day agomessage-square21fedilink
minus-squareYingwu@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkarrow-up5arrow-down1·1 day agoPoetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2arrow-down9·edit-21 day agoSure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO. You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up4·edit-21 day agoSome phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1arrow-down3·22 hours agoThank you captain obvious.
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up2·16 hours agoSo the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1·edit-27 hours agoYeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s Live Laugh Love Level.
Poetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO.
You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
Thank you captain obvious.
So the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
Yeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s
Live Laugh Love Level.