The submitted version of this cartoon is seen here on the left. My editor, however, believed something more was needed to clarify why this guy coming out of the house is so mad―so he changed the caption to the version on the right. I acquiesced on this one, but always felt like it was redundant and too leading. I later restored my preferred version for inclusion in a book.
Some background on this comic:
Transcript:
That’s the one the editor forced to be clearer‽
It’s the one Larson agreed to while his editor begged on hands and knees
OG version is better