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what if the mobsters unionized
The people’s mobster.
Great use of an unnecessary comma - twice!
Jay, I love your style. I think this could work as a less is more type situation. I kind of had to do a double take to take in what was going on. Maybe as if the Feducci were the only idiots to think blind-folding ones self makes someone disappear. Then everyone is unamused with their antics. Not sure, it’s cute though!
Thanks man, yea I was feeling like too much text was a bad idea. Haha
Yeah, no, of course! I was still loving it anyways. I actually thought about it again before I went to bed. No lie! It’s a good one!